Sunday, April 1, 2012

Anatomy of a House pt.1

The Last Inhabitant

An empty shell choked with vines
Where people danced
The wind resides
Breathless in a crowded room
No laughter
To dispel the gloom
A single shadow walks the floors
Peeps through keyholes
Opens doors
The last inhabitant
Lets you in
But will she let you out again?


  1. Very deep...definitely deserves a couple of read overs. I enjoyed it!

    Here's my poem:

  2. Yike, anatomy of a haunted house, no doubt! I like this, it very atmospheric. Happy April and I look forward to reading you during the month!

  3. Hello.
    Sounds like a creepy house to me! Nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing.
    Good luck with NaPoWriMo. I'm doing it in addition to the A-Z Challenge.

    The Attraction...

  4. Wow! This reminded me of a scary movie. Can't wait to read the next parts!