Monday, April 2, 2012

Anatomy of a House pt. 2

The Gate


There is a gate
At the end of the drive
Twisted metal
Looks alive
It opens slowly
Rust on rust
Just wide enough
To earn your trust
Enter will you if you dare
But know that she is waiting there

5 comments:

  1. Leaves me wondering who is waiting on the other side of the gate...Great poem!

    Here's mine:

    ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/2012/04/poetry-challenge-day-2-running-water.html

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  2. Brilliant piece of work, amazing talent.
    Loved your poem :)

    I am at http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/02/touch-of-love/

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  3. Ooh, I like these Anatomy of a House poems! Looking forward to reading more.

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  4. Yikes! I'm almost too afraid to continue, but continue I must. On to part 3! Lovely!

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  5. Hello.
    Gives me the shivers just thinking about it, but you have me intrigued. I'm off to read Pt.3!

    Day 2: Born To Love you

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