An empty shell choked with vines
Where people danced
The wind resides
Breathless in a crowded room
No laughter
To dispel the gloom
A single shadow walks the floors
Peeps through keyholes
Opens doors
The last inhabitant
Lets you in
But will she let you out again?
Very deep...definitely deserves a couple of read overs. I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteHere's my poem:
http://ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/2012/04/trying-something-new-poetry-challenge.html
Yike, anatomy of a haunted house, no doubt! I like this, it very atmospheric. Happy April and I look forward to reading you during the month!
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteSounds like a creepy house to me! Nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with NaPoWriMo. I'm doing it in addition to the A-Z Challenge.
The Attraction...
Wow! This reminded me of a scary movie. Can't wait to read the next parts!
ReplyDeletehttp://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/04/lyric-fire-napowrimo-2012-day-3-words-are-a-crime.html